"Creator of the Infinite"

[cold101]

"Creator of the Infinite"

Im going to kill the sin, before i begin
let me introduce the what im inducing,
Let me start off the introductions, before we make the corrections
Correct my wrong if in the clear, because im running out of time
its like a rhyme im trying to find, sadly im failing greatly
The pain is immense dont fret, its only the beginning
Theres worse to come my love, much deeper wounds to heal
The operation will commence as planned, its time
Go to sleep, close your weary eyes and ill cut open the stitches that hold you tight
ill rip you open from the inside out and fix your flaws, ill make you bleed
and scream, no one will hear your voice, ill twist the chords and silence
your reprehensible screeching, Ill make you twitch in fear the dreams you create,
Let the gas from the mask fill your lungs and silence your vocal fears,
Close you eyes and sleep into dreams of a land far from now,
you'll become the newest member under the knife, your blood will become my gloves
newest designs and creations, your organs will breathe my vengeance.
When im done with your flaws, ill make you a perfected beauty only a master
artist can appreciate, When im done the whole world will grasp my essence and your beauty, You will become my masterpiece of perfected flawed beauty.
I merely creating a design of perfection, upon a imperfect canvas of art,
ill be Leonardo De Vinci of modern day and youll be my Mona Lisa masterpiece of Surgery.
I will become god in this room of hollow walls i will create a masterpiece of my own design as god did upon this land, I will become the creator of the infinite.

[rabbibenyonah]

"Creator of the Infinite"

Im going to kill the sin, before i begin
let me introduce the what im inducing,
Let me start off the introductions, before we make the corrections
Correct my wrong if in the clear, because im running out of time
its like a rhyme im trying to find, sadly im failing greatly
The pain is immense dont fret, its only the beginning
Theres worse to come my love, much deeper wounds to heal
The operation will commence as planned, its time
Go to sleep, close your weary eyes and ill cut open the stitches that hold you tight
ill rip you open from the inside out and fix your flaws, ill make you bleed
and scream, no one will hear your voice, ill twist the chords and silence
your reprehensible screeching, Ill make you twitch in fear the dreams you create,
Let the gas from the mask fill your lungs and silence your vocal fears,
Close you eyes and sleep into dreams of a land far from now,
you'll become the newest member under the knife, your blood will become my gloves
newest designs and creations, your organs will breathe my vengeance.
When im done with your flaws, ill make you a perfected beauty only a master
artist can appreciate, When im done the whole world will grasp my essence and your beauty, You will become my masterpiece of perfected flawed beauty.
I merely creating a design of perfection, upon a imperfect canvas of art,
ill be Leonardo De Vinci of modern day and youll be my Mona Lisa masterpiece of Surgery.
I will become god in this room of hollow walls i will create a masterpiece of my own design as god did upon this land, I will become the creator of the infinite.


not sure exactly how to respond to this one. you certainly have a knack for generating vivid imagery! So it seems like what you are trying to say is that you object to the notions of perfection and beauty that people feel bound to and controlled by, that you appreciate what others view as imperfection as a unique form of beauty unto itself, and that you are deeply angered or hurt or both by the the conflict that ensues between these extremes?

or, perhaps I am totally off.

Either way I have to tell you honestly, that I found the violent images here a bit disturbing...... no matter how perfect or imperfect, people are what they are, I dont know that "surgery" whether physical or emotional, can ever change that on a fundamental level. I would definetly appreciate some explanation on your part as to what you intended to express here.

[cold101]

not sure exactly how to respond to this one. you certainly have a knack for generating vivid imagery! So it seems like what you are trying to say is that you object to the notions of perfection and beauty that people feel bound to and controlled by, that you appreciate what others view as imperfection as a unique form of beauty unto itself, and that you are deeply angered or hurt or both by the the conflict that ensues between these extremes?

or, perhaps I am totally off.

Either way I have to tell you honestly, that I found the violent images here a bit disturbing...... no matter how perfect or imperfect, people are what they are, I dont know that "surgery" whether physical or emotional, can ever change that on a fundamental level. I would definetly appreciate some explanation on your part as to what you intended to express here.


Its actually a mixture of opinions.
*Surgeon(s)=Plastic Surgeons
**Certain parts of this poem are thoughts of the Plastic Surgeon

"Im going to kill the sin, before i begin
let me introduce the what im inducing,
Let me start off the introductions, before we make the corrections"

Sin referring to the evil or bad views of Imperfection, how if your not perfect its bad and such.
Let me start off the introductions, before we make the corrections was referring to, listing every flaw and the corrections to them.

Correct my wrong if in the clear, because im running out of time
its like a rhyme im trying to find, sadly im failing greatly
The pain is immense dont fret, its only the beginning
Theres worse to come my love, much deeper wounds to heal
The operation will commence as planned, its time

Correct my wrong if im in the clear, meaning "correct my mistakes if i said any otherwise i believe i made none" showing confidence. Running out of time meaning to express everything as quick as possible before the "operation"
"the pain is immense dont fret, its only the beginning, theres worse to come my love, much deeper wounds to heal" referring how people like joan rivers have constantly used surgery numerous times to correct there flaws each painful and each sometimes deeper then the other.

*Go to sleep, close your weary eyes and ill cut open the stitches that hold you tight
ill rip you open from the inside out and fix your flaws, ill make you bleed
and scream, no one will hear your voice, ill twist the chords and silence
your reprehensible screeching, Ill make you twitch in fear the dreams you create,
**Thoughts

"Ill cut open the stiches that hold you tight" referring to the medical term of reopening wounds (from previous surgerys) and or skin., Case of ill make you bleed and scream (there have been reported cases patients did not fall asleep before surgery and during surgery a person screamed)
"no one will hear your voice, ill twist the chords and silence
your reprehensible screeching," referring to in most cases of surgeons they have records that show how well they are, if they mess up during a surgery they get a black mark which could ruin there career and i was creating a vivid image of a surgeon who believes in perfection, and if a patient didnt fall asleep instead of people knowing his mistakes he would do anything possible to correct it (surgeons thoughts to himself) hence forth "no one will hear your voice, ill twist the chords and silence your reprehensible screeching" and the case of twitching "random body movements during surgery if any"

Let the gas from the mask fill your lungs and silence your vocal fears,
Close you eyes and sleep into dreams of a land far from now,
you'll become the newest member under the knife, your blood will become my gloves
newest designs and creations, your organs will breathe my vengeance.

Morphine(or laughing gas) gas filling the lungs puts you to sleep and you become silent during surgery, usually your eyes close and you dream.
"Youll become the newest member under the knife, your blood will become my gloves newest designs and creations, your organs will breathe my vengeance"
Referring to Knife used to cut open a person, blood covering a surgeons gloves, and case of organs (removing) or if the surgeon is determined to make the surgery go well "breathe my vengeance"
Its alot of mild sarcasm (sorta)


When im done with your flaws, ill make you a perfected beauty only a master
artist can appreciate, When im done the whole world will grasp my essence and your beauty, You will become my masterpiece of perfected flawed beauty.

Meaning when the surgeon is done he will have corrected all the flaws he believes, and make this person a perfected beauty that no one can say is flawed. This person will be his most prized surgery and his surgeon records will go well and he will grasp the fame per say (like when celebrities announce there surgeons and such and they appear on T.V.)

**I merely creating a design of perfection, upon a imperfect canvas of art,
ill be Leonardo De Vinci of modern day and youll be my Mona Lisa masterpiece of Surgery.
I will become god in this room of hollow walls i will create a masterpiece of my own design as god did upon this land, I will become the creator of the infinite.
**thoughts

Meaning, This person he is operating on is so flawed he is determined to make this person perfected like how some people say Leonardo De Vinci's greatest and perfect work was "the Mona Lisa"
And also meaning
This surgeon will create something new in the room, and he will become a creator of "infinite" beauty.

[rabbibenyonah]

Its actually a mixture of opinions.
*Surgeon(s)=Plastic Surgeons
**Certain parts of this poem are thoughts of the Plastic Surgeon

"Im going to kill the sin, before i begin
let me introduce the what im inducing,
Let me start off the introductions, before we make the corrections"

Sin referring to the evil or bad views of Imperfection, how if your not perfect its bad and such.
Let me start off the introductions, before we make the corrections was referring to, listing every flaw and the corrections to them.

Correct my wrong if in the clear, because im running out of time
its like a rhyme im trying to find, sadly im failing greatly
The pain is immense dont fret, its only the beginning
Theres worse to come my love, much deeper wounds to heal
The operation will commence as planned, its time

Correct my wrong if im in the clear, meaning "correct my mistakes if i said any otherwise i believe i made none" showing confidence. Running out of time meaning to express everything as quick as possible before the "operation"
"the pain is immense dont fret, its only the beginning, theres worse to come my love, much deeper wounds to heal" referring how people like joan rivers have constantly used surgery numerous times to correct there flaws each painful and each sometimes deeper then the other.

*Go to sleep, close your weary eyes and ill cut open the stitches that hold you tight
ill rip you open from the inside out and fix your flaws, ill make you bleed
and scream, no one will hear your voice, ill twist the chords and silence
your reprehensible screeching, Ill make you twitch in fear the dreams you create,
**Thoughts

"Ill cut open the stiches that hold you tight" referring to the medical term of reopening wounds (from previous surgerys) and or skin., Case of ill make you bleed and scream (there have been reported cases patients did not fall asleep before surgery and during surgery a person screamed)
"no one will hear your voice, ill twist the chords and silence
your reprehensible screeching," referring to in most cases of surgeons they have records that show how well they are, if they mess up during a surgery they get a black mark which could ruin there career and i was creating a vivid image of a surgeon who believes in perfection, and if a patient didnt fall asleep instead of people knowing his mistakes he would do anything possible to correct it (surgeons thoughts to himself) hence forth "no one will hear your voice, ill twist the chords and silence your reprehensible screeching" and the case of twitching "random body movements during surgery if any"

Let the gas from the mask fill your lungs and silence your vocal fears,
Close you eyes and sleep into dreams of a land far from now,
you'll become the newest member under the knife, your blood will become my gloves
newest designs and creations, your organs will breathe my vengeance.

Morphine(or laughing gas) gas filling the lungs puts you to sleep and you become silent during surgery, usually your eyes close and you dream.
"Youll become the newest member under the knife, your blood will become my gloves newest designs and creations, your organs will breathe my vengeance"
Referring to Knife used to cut open a person, blood covering a surgeons gloves, and case of organs (removing) or if the surgeon is determined to make the surgery go well "breathe my vengeance"
Its alot of mild sarcasm (sorta)


When im done with your flaws, ill make you a perfected beauty only a master
artist can appreciate, When im done the whole world will grasp my essence and your beauty, You will become my masterpiece of perfected flawed beauty.

Meaning when the surgeon is done he will have corrected all the flaws he believes, and make this person a perfected beauty that no one can say is flawed. This person will be his most prized surgery and his surgeon records will go well and he will grasp the fame per say (like when celebrities announce there surgeons and such and they appear on T.V.)

**I merely creating a design of perfection, upon a imperfect canvas of art,
ill be Leonardo De Vinci of modern day and youll be my Mona Lisa masterpiece of Surgery.
I will become god in this room of hollow walls i will create a masterpiece of my own design as god did upon this land, I will become the creator of the infinite.
**thoughts

Meaning, This person he is operating on is so flawed he is determined to make this person perfected like how some people say Leonardo De Vinci's greatest and perfect work was "the Mona Lisa"
And also meaning
This surgeon will create something new in the room, and he will become a creator of "infinite" beauty.


so, where did these ideas emerge from? Are you writing just to articulate your thoughts on plasic surgery? Are you using this as a symbol of a larger social problem? or something else?

[cold101]

so, where did these ideas emerge from? Are you writing just to articulate your thoughts on plasic surgery? Are you using this as a symbol of a larger social problem? or something else?


Kinda everything to be honest when i write it usually depends on my moods and thoughts
in this particular case
i first had inspiration from thinkin to myself "i wish i could be perfect" and how i envied alot of people i kno on there looks, talents, and such. Then it came to mind how celebrities example try to be perfect.
Then i remember reading "The Illustrated Running Press edition of the american Classic Grays Anatomy" which is a book of medical reference well over 1000+ pages that details the human body in and out and everything you can ponder (which most in the medical field use or have read continuously)
So i began to think of Plastic Surgeons and there jobs how strict it can be, the thoughts that may go through some whether little or even extreme thoughts.

Then thought of a situation a "flawed" girl who comes to see a famous plastic surgeon who can fix her "flaws" but this plastic surgeon has such a extreme view on perfection that he must fix anything and everything he believes is a flaw, and his extreme thoughts to himself if things go wrong, then thought up of this plastic surgeon is so confident in himself (ego).

Because usually when people have confidence some go and have major egos,
Some celebrities themselves have major egos

So its kind of a mixture of thoughts among alot.
Teenagers on how "looks mean everything", "im the **** thoughts"(ego) and teenagers always thinking if there not perfect there flawed.
Then how some people even grown up go through the same issues, but instead of talking it out or finding ways to deal with it some go to extreme measures.
Theres even teens out there that there parents pay for plastic surgerys and stuff.
Then Plastic Surgeons how they value there job how some can even have a concieted ego, or how some view there job in extreme ways

[rabbibenyonah]

Kinda everything to be honest when i write it usually depends on my moods and thoughts
in this particular case
i first had inspiration from thinkin to myself "i wish i could be perfect" and how i envied alot of people i kno on there looks, talents, and such. Then it came to mind how celebrities example try to be perfect.
Then i remember reading "The Illustrated Running Press edition of the american Classic Grays Anatomy" which is a book of medical reference well over 1000+ pages that details the human body in and out and everything you can ponder (which most in the medical field use or have read continuously)
So i began to think of Plastic Surgeons and there jobs how strict it can be, the thoughts that may go through some whether little or even extreme thoughts.

Then thought of a situation a "flawed" girl who comes to see a famous plastic surgeon who can fix her "flaws" but this plastic surgeon has such a extreme view on perfection that he must fix anything and everything he believes is a flaw, and his extreme thoughts to himself if things go wrong, then thought up of this plastic surgeon is so confident in himself (ego).

Because usually when people have confidence some go and have major egos,
Some celebrities themselves have major egos

So its kind of a mixture of thoughts among alot.
Teenagers on how "looks mean everything", "im the **** thoughts"(ego) and teenagers always thinking if there not perfect there flawed.
Then how some people even grown up go through the same issues, but instead of talking it out or finding ways to deal with it some go to extreme measures.
Theres even teens out there that there parents pay for plastic surgerys and stuff.
Then Plastic Surgeons how they value there job how some can even have a concieted ego, or how some view there job in extreme ways

I'm so glad that you can see through the hype and know that there is no perfection and that our insane drive to attain it is self-destructive, and that its much more productive in the end, just to accept ourselves. I would say, however, that there is a difference between striving to obtain an inherently subjective physical perfection that can never be attained, and a much more productive effort to attain internal, personal perfection, which I believe is either attainable or, at the very least in striving for it there is meaningful growth and development. so go deep.